Don’t put a breather on the bottom of the engine. It will pump oil out.
You want it at a height near the top of the timing cover. Even then it might be oily.
The reed on my Commando is at the base of the crankcase in the Combat type breather position. This is higher than the pickup level but low enough to pump any oil back to the tank due to wet sumping after standing for months. The important thing here is you MUST run the reed to the oil tank & then vent the oil tank as well.
Yeah those crimps are not the best to be honest although they have been ok on this bikeIt’s good that you’re pioneering it.
Those pre-insulated crimped electrical terminals tended to come loose on my bike.